From: marksfoster@live.co.uk
To: retro_penguins@hotmail.com
Subject: Your article
Date: Wed, 17 Aug 2011 12:05:13 +0100
Hi Alannah
Ma read me your article which I thought was - well written, funny and personal. I really think you should start a blog - Deli Girl. You could even get advertising around it - starting with the deli.
Couple of minor observations (sorry for being a pedant) but tomatoes are a fruit not a vegetable and mushrooms are a fungus.
Ma read me your article which I thought was - well written, funny and personal. I really think you should start a blog - Deli Girl. You could even get advertising around it - starting with the deli.
Couple of minor observations (sorry for being a pedant) but tomatoes are a fruit not a vegetable and mushrooms are a fungus.
I've just tidied up a bit of the spelling and grammar (you seem to have inherited your mother's misunderstanding of the apostrophe) but have left it alone otherwise.
One thing you didn't mention was your homing instinct for free samples at supermarkets.
Well done.
Papa
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Papa
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